Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Chapter 23: I'm on My Honeymoon, But If You Need Me...

What do you think of Randy's time management tips? Would you have walked out of that grocery store, knowing you overpaid by $16.55? Do you have to-do lists? 

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  1. I definitely believe I would've walked out of the store. Randy definitely has poor time management. I do have to do lists but I am the same way I never follow them and I get off task very easily but I try to follow my schedule and keep it as consistent as need be.

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  2. He doesn't have good time management and I am a very frugal person so I probably would have stayed and try to get my money back

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  3. Randy doesn't have good time management tips. The money that I over spend I would walk right back in and talk and try to get my money back. I'm not to sure about my to do list.

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  4. I like Randy's time management types. I would have not walked out of the grocery store without the $16 because that is a lot of money to me and my family. No I do not make to do lists, but I should because I think it would keep me more organized.

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  5. i have a to do list but for the most part its all on the person you are. if you like to be rate on time then yes just accept your lose. if your easy going then go back in and get your money back. me personally I would try to get my money back but if i were on strict time schedule i would just walk out like randy did.

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  6. now and days you have to be carful on what you buy mostly i try to look how much the put in the product like the oz. and servings that are in the product. because the industry is making more money and spending less on each product like the serving and how much they put in the product

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  7. I would of walked back in to claim my 16 dollars. If it was for charity or a benefit for something good i would of left it. i do have a to do list but it not really a to do list it really depends on what is most important to me and that's what i work on.

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  8. I would of walked back in to claim my 16 dollars. If it was for charity or a benefit for something good i would of left it. i do have a to do list but it not really a to do list it really depends on what is most important to me and that's what i work on.

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  9. I would walk back and claim my 16 dollars. i would give it up and give it up and give it to a vet charity so the animals could get the help they need.

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  10. I think that Randy's time management tips are really good.If it was more then 16 dollars I wouldn't of walked out of the grocery store but since it was only 16 it would be ok I would let it good to a good cause of some sort. I have a to-do list all day I have homework and I then I have a list of things to do at my work.

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